What do you think of this song for my musical?

Wow, those are really good lyrics. Like, they look very professional and everything. People could easily empathize as well, because you speak of being ordinary and aspiring higher, happiness, romance..and its not too vague or anything. Like its solid. Yet poetic enough to be beautiful, relatable enough for everyday viewers. People would find themselves interested in this I think, the audience. Sympathetic. Nice!